Friday, November 28, 2014

Round 1 Match B "results"!

A few judges kindly chimed in with comments on the moot match-up between Will LaForge (the writer of Story 1) and the mystery opponent (oh, alright--it was me with Story 2). Read those stories here!
  • Judge 1: Both stories are quite intriguing, the heat begging to come to full exploration. I'd like to see the continuation of each. Nicely written!
  • Judge 2: Story 1 was hot with the brief glimpses of the woman in the window and the guys reactions to her. I really want more of this story from the legend to what happened next and then some.
  • Judge 3: Both stories were excellent, and so different from one another. Story 1 was easy to get into, with colloquial language and a fun premise. Story 2 was more formal, a different feeling, but equally hot because of the young woman's nearly palpable trepidation and fear. Kudos to both authors!
Will moves on, and will face Meredith in Round 2, in January! Match C will be posted on the story blog tomorrow!

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